Pam urged me to submit Stuffed in a Box to the school publication, so I thought I’d put it up here.
Thoughts, anyone? It’s a short read, just over 1,000 words.
Stuffed in a Box
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Pam urged me to submit Stuffed in a Box to the school publication, so I thought I’d put it up here.
Thoughts, anyone? It’s a short read, just over 1,000 words.
Comments are closed.
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Ell made music much the same way as a carpenter drives a nailooooohhhh, I can feel the chemicals being generated as my brain does a TDS on that metaphor !Yea, that’s how I remembered Him. You could tell his was a tortured soul.Sorta like Saltons’L8RK
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Great stuff, Jeff. I particularly appreciate the terseness of it – that’s not the right word, actually; it sounds like some snippets of a story, told in the space between drinks, or between breaths. I like.