Stuffed in a Box
Pam urged me to submit Stuffed in a Box to the school publication, so I thought I'd put it up here.
Thoughts, anyone? It's a short read, just over 1,000 words.
Pam urged me to submit Stuffed in a Box to the school publication, so I thought I'd put it up here.
Thoughts, anyone? It's a short read, just over 1,000 words.
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AUTHOR: Rex Karz
EMAIL: rexkarz@me.com figure it out
URL: http://rexkarz.com
DATE: 10/07/2001 11:30:00 PM
Ell made music much the same way as a carpenter drives a nailooooohhhh, I can feel the chemicals being generated as my brain does a TDS on that metaphor !Yea, that's how I remembered Him. You could tell his was a tortured soul.Sorta like Saltons'L8RK
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AUTHOR: Luke
EMAIL: luke@captainfez.com
URL: http://www.captainfez.com/
DATE: 10/10/2001 4:20:00 AM
Great stuff, Jeff. I particularly appreciate the terseness of it - that's not the right word, actually; it sounds like some snippets of a story, told in the space between drinks, or between breaths. I like.